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I become human when i stop
letting my tie roll around
a can and twirl in-between
fingers.


I become human when i cease
looking down, i cease lusting for
landings, i die with the wind
sleep with the hums of
birds that have been calling me names,
wondering who I really am
why unwinged, I soar.


I become human when I melt
some of me as the rays pierce
and the clouds drift somewhere far,
to a point i stop believing
that there is a sky
and there lives its owner.


I become human when i fear none.
never scared of dead tree branches
may wound me
because greed for
immortality will stop me from finding
my place under this sun.


I become human when I give up on
flying all the time
and move on walking
barefoot.


And I am free to be a kite once more
when the world spins too much
and all I want is to
stare at it from above


close my eyes
throw my self downwards

and hear no sound of


shattering.
©2008-2009 ~kLiT-sHy
:iconklit-shy:

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:iconelorah-seychah:
Wow, I really like this, although the last couple of lines I find a little disturbing because of what it may mean on interpretation. Either way, I think it is a well written piece and I like the visual that goes with it ^_^

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:iconeffamay:
this was delicious

:+favlove:

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Dum spiro spero.
:iconrakistangnars:
And I am free to be a kite once more
when the world spins too much
and all I want is to
stare at it from above


close my eyes
throw my self downwards

and hear no sound of


shattering.


gawd. gawd.

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your ordinary girl ATTRACTS men. i BEWILDER them. that's the BIG difference :)

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:iconrchelsea2005:
Lovely.

The end is just...wow.

(ps. Tori Amos? Made of win.)

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"I just want someone to hear what I have to say. And maybe if I talk long enough, it'll make sense."
:iconchaosmakir:
and you quoted tori amos in your comments!! *mwah!*

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.if you want me, then stop begging..i don't put out for charity..if you want me there's no discount price tonight..
.katy..perry.=.if you can afford me.
:icontolleranzabella:
Last section (the notion of shattering) = win.

Tori Amos = win.

Good job. :)

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...and the beat goes on...
:iconladylazrus:
ethereal and enchanting.
well done :clap:

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"Dying
Is an art, like everything else.
I do it exceptionally well."
:iconladylazrus:
I also totally
:heart: LOVE :heart:
the preface picture.

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"Dying
Is an art, like everything else.
I do it exceptionally well."
:iconermitanyongiskagero:
now im starting to like being a kite.. :D
simple thing from being so heavenly..

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"Gusto ko makarinig ng walang distorted na gitara pero distorted ang lyrics.." - Marcus Adoro
:icondrop-asd:
Gosh, the last part is... :faint: It echoed in my head over and over

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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...

"A song can also not talk about love..."

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